It is inside that they cry; With broken wings, Still they seek to fly.
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I am not always a fan of haikus, because people tend to use the format just to use the format. So the context ends up feeling more like a fortune cookie.
That being said, what you wrote is a perfect example of what a Haiku should be.
I really felt this piece and It’s well written, so great job.
I totally agree with your sentiment. I appreciate your honesty and your in depth consideration of this piece; your response is greatly valued. Thank you.
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I am not always a fan of haikus, because people tend to use the format just to use the format. So the context ends up feeling more like a fortune cookie.
That being said, what you wrote is a perfect example of what a Haiku should be.
I really felt this piece and It’s well written, so great job.
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I totally agree with your sentiment. I appreciate your honesty and your in depth consideration of this piece; your response is greatly valued. Thank you.
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